Native english speaking crowd ... help me

Very interesting CV! I noticed the following things...

In the section "iTeam (12/2004 - 12/2005)"

You use the word "responsables" you need to change this to "As one of the people responsible for the SMS..."

Also in the same sentence you have missed out "the" - "i developed the following projects"

In the section "VJ"

"I was resident VJ (Visual Jockey, projections) at the following nightclubs and events."

Hope this helps
 
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