Firstly, would be better to have the songs hosted on ur site imo because u need to register on soundclick to listen to the songs. Fortunately though... I had already registered
Eternity:
Hmm this sounds far too much like 'three drives - greece 2000'. The bassline is also out of key, the 3rd bar of the chorus most noticably. I didnt really listen to this for long because its not really my sorta thing. The production seems up to scratch though.
Voodoo:
I dont dig hard house so i best not listen to this
No return:
This one sounds a bit like ferry corstens 'punk'. The main lead and some of the structure is a bit too close to punk for my liking. Again its not really my sorta thing though so i didnt give it a thorough listen. The production was fine again though, not much to moan about
Turn me on:
This really wasnt my thing, it seems like its aimed at the more commercial market. The bass reminded me of 'lustral - everytime' due to its sound and chord sequence. I also think it didnt really work with the vocal, the root note of the vocal differed to that of the song imo. I'm not really a fan of simple offbeat basslines. Unless they are done really well then i find them pretty unimaginative and a bit dated. Thats just my opinion though.
Tokyo Skyline:
This is pretty cool. A bit spacy for my tastes but i thought this was the better of the tracks i listened to. Crit wise, that piano in the break is out of tune so i would ditch it. The transition to the break could be a bit better, at the moment it sounds like the song is ending because the perc just fades out. The percussion was pretty cool in this though, i liked the experimental sound to it. It had a kinda electro vibe going on too.
